This reminds me of my first chapter of my novel. I am currently updating revising my novel . The first chapter in the original draft got scrapped and a new one was in placed =D This represent the new first chapter ^_^ 

(Source: instantlyenamored)

So I started my job last Saturday =D And I love it XD I like the people I work with and the hours. I have been working quite a lot this week (as I am training). Pay days next week =D 

I am still inexperience with coffee making (though the guy at my work is teaching me tomorrow). 

Anyways…

(what else is new: I register for my University Classes & got my University Photo ID)

So now that the read-through of my first draft is finished. I have been kind of letting my novel sit. Been thinking about everything I noticed and as well as taking my friends critique into consideration. I have also been giving myself time to clear up. Deciding how I want to proceed and what actions that need (and I want) to be done to the manuscript. 

Finally I have basically decided on how I am going forth with this. Made up what I want to change. I am keeping the jiffs of it, however the second draft will be drastically different from the first. 

The second draft will be as poorly written as the first, however I am not worrying about that. The second draft is focusing on, what I believe, the most crucial parts (basically the whole novel) that need to be rewritten or changed. Setting. Character Development. Plot Points. Sub Plots. 

I am also going to watch out with my writing style. I tend to tell more then show. I also think my characters do not speak enough 0_0 

Well…here I go. Let see where this second draft takes me haha.

“You are very beautiful.”

(Source: shadowhunted, via cassandraclare)